深圳市罗湖区2013年1月小学六年级语文上册期末考试A卷试卷参考答案及评分建议

<div style="layout-grid:; "><div style="text-align: center;"><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#FF0000"><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">小学</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">语文</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">六年级期末供题考试参考答案及评分标准建议</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(2013.01)</span></font></div><br><div style="text-align: center;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: bold; "><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D">第一部分:基础知识积累与运用</font></span></div><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">一、知识积累水平考查(共43分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.把下面破折号前的句子抄写在田字格里,做到正确、工整、美观。(3分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>分值3分,分三等,要求格式正确,按要求书写,不写错字、别字,不漏字、减字。开头未空两格减1分,抄写了作者名字的减1分。</span><br><br><span>一等(3分):书写规范,整洁、美观,基本功好。</span><br><br><span>二等(2分):书写较规范,卷面整洁,基本功好。</span><br><br><span>三等(1分):书写不规范,卷面不整洁,基本功较差。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.看拼音,写词语。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(6分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;每个词1分;四字词的错一个字扣0.5分,直到扣完该词的1分为止。共6分。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;</span><span>气概&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" letter-spacing:; ">勤勉</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;德高望重</span><span style=" letter-spacing:; ">&nbsp;</span><br><br><span style=" letter-spacing:; ">追随</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" letter-spacing:; ">滋润</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;不同凡响</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">用所给的字组词,再选填在相应的句子里,写序号。(3分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">妙</span><span>:</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">A</span><span>(&nbsp;巧妙&nbsp;)&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">B</span><span>(&nbsp;奇妙&nbsp;&nbsp;)&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">C</span><span>(&nbsp;精妙&nbsp;&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.把成语补充完整。(3分)(错一空扣0.5分,扣完为止)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(以下仅供参考,填其它成语的正确即可给分)</span><br><br><span>世外桃源&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;千方百计&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;水落石出</span><br><br><span>波涛汹涌&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;无影无踪&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;为所欲为</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">读下面人物的</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">话,</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">分别读出怎样的语气</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">?</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">选择正确的序号填在括号里</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">。(3分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;1、B&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2、A&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;3、C</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6.判断下列说法的正误,对的打“√”,错的打“×”。(3分)每空1分,共3分。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①</span><span>“她的心跳得</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">厉害</span><span>!”、“莫言的文笔很</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">厉害</span><span>”两句中“厉害”表示的意思相同。</span><span>(&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">×&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span>②</span><span>《蛙》《丰乳肥臀》《红高粱家族》都是莫言的代表作。</span><span>(&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">√</span><span>&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>③</span><span style=" letter-spacing:-; ">西蒙和桑娜分别是《穷人》和《蒙娜丽莎之约》两篇课文中的人物。</span><span>(&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">×</span><span>&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7.请把省略号正确用法的序号填入括号内。&nbsp;&nbsp;(3分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①“别别别……”他急了,“碧云!碧云!”他用双手拼命地摇着轮椅,想挡住我的路,“你放下!等碧云来拿!”&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>(&nbsp;B、D&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span style=" letter-spacing:-; ">②那时,我总是不由得想起那“耳聋”的老人,那清晨里我唯一的听众……(&nbsp;&nbsp;A&nbsp;)</span><span style=" letter-spacing:-; "></span><br><br><span>③“</span><span>先生,我买不起,我的钱不够</span><span>……”我的话低得连自己都听不见了,我不知道怎样才好。</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(&nbsp;&nbsp;D&nbsp;&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">8.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">按要求写句子。(</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">10</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">每句2分,共10分</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span><span>①</span></span><span>(</span><span>缩句)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;向往是目标。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;</span><br><br><span><span>②</span></span><span>&nbsp;(改为感叹句)</span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">钓鱼岛就是我国的固有领土!</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span><span>③</span></span><span>(修改病句)</span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">第十三届深圳读书月在市中心书城隆重地举行了盛大的启动仪式。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span><span>④</span></span><span>(改为不带否定词的句子)</span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">后一句改为“但是觉得一定得这样做。”&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>⑤</span><span>(用恰当的关联词语把两句连成一句)</span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">既……又……&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;不但……而且&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;不仅……也&nbsp;……&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">9.请用简洁的话表达你对下面课文中或人物或动物的喜爱之情。(二选一)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>请在《草虫的部落》和《老人与海鸥》中任选一篇按上面要求写话:</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(3分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(要求:在两篇课文中任选一篇作答,至少写两个分句以上。语句连贯、表达流畅、紧扣课文中心。错别字每两个扣0.5分,1个不扣分。答案为其它课文内容的不给分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>例:《老人与海鸥》中的老人令我心生尊敬,作为一名自身也不富裕的老人,他真正将海鸥当成了自己的儿女来关爱,日复一日用自己的行动诠释着“无私奉献”的精神,他和海鸥间的深情厚谊令人感动。</span><br><br><span>……</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">10.按课文填空</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(6</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(每空1分,错一个字扣0.5分,扣完为止,总扣分不超过6分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span><span>①</span></span><span>天之道也,人之道也。</span><br><br><span><span>②</span></span><span>燕山月似钩,快走踏清秋。</span><br><br><span><span>③</span></span><span>千夫指,孺子牛</span><br><br><span><span>④</span></span><span>善哉,峨峨兮若泰山!</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">二.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">语言实践。(</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">0.5+0.5+2=</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3分&nbsp;)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">第三空至少写两个分句以上,要求语句连贯、表达流畅、言之有理。错别字每两个扣0.5分,1个不扣分。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>例如:</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">我是一名</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;消防员,&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">此时我已登船,如果你继续</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;留在地球,&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">送你几句生存秘笈:</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;地震中一定要寻找“生命金三角”,在坚固的墙体下你会有更多生存的机会,如果你在家,一定不要往家具多的地方跑,避免砸伤。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><div style="text-align: center;"><strong><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D">第二部分&nbsp;阅读积累与运用</font></strong></div><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">三.阅读理解能力考查</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">。(</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">12</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">+</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">12</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">=2</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(一)课内阅读,回答后面问题。(12分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">少年闰土(节选)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">12.(共5空,每空0.5分,共2分,全错扣2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>一轮&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;一望无际&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;捏&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;刺&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" letter-spacing:-; ">quān</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">13.(每空1分,共2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>动作&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;英勇/勇敢/机智勇敢</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">14.(每空1分,共4分)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;月光、天空、瓜地&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;烘托</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">15.(每空1分,共2分)</span><span>&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>“其间”的意思是指</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;在……之间&nbsp;</span><span>,在课文中具体指</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;在天空和瓜地之间。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">16.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;这一段话描写出少年闰土怎样的形象?这样写与后文中年的闰土形象形成对比,</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">其意图是什么?(第1问0.5分,第2问1.5分,共2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;写出了少年闰土机智勇敢的形象。(0.5分,单答勇敢也给分。)</span><span><br></span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;通过少年闰土与中年时闰土木讷呆板形象的对比,形成强烈反差,让读者清楚认识到黑暗的社会制度对青少年的残害,批判了旧社会对人民的残酷压迫。(答到这重意思即可酌情给分。)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(二)课外阅读,回答后面问题。(12分)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">秋韵胜夏花</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">17.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">联系上下文,给下列文中词语找近义词(每空1分,最多扣2分)(只要是给出词语的近义词都给分,错别字1个0.5分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>融入 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;五颜六色&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;卓尔不群&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">18.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;(共2分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;秋果丰收&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;对祖国团圆的期盼</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">19.(共2分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>秋风、秋声</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">20.(共2分,每空1分)</span><br><br><span>①&nbsp;修辞手法:&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">拟人&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>②&nbsp;寓意:</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">以秋叶寓意台湾等游子,大地寓祖国,象征着对祖国团圆的殷切希望。</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">21.</span><span>&nbsp;(1+1+2=4分)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">“它们”</span><span>指的是</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">“秋叶象征着的游子”</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">;&nbsp;“我们”</span><span>指的是</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;祖国大陆</span><span>,</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>假如你是小作者,从</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">“落叶飘落”</span><span>你会联想到什么呢?</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; "></span><br><br><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">循环的生病/珍惜时间/乐于奉献/,</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">(可从多方面作答,要求两个分句以上,语句通顺、言之有理即可酌情给分。)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><div style="text-align: center;"><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D"><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">第三部分:</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">写作积累与运用(30分)</span></font></div><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><span>作文评价不要为难学生,作文最高可以打满分(30分);最低分只要是动笔,有一件具体的事,建议不要低于15分,当然,考生一字未写就只能是0分。</span><br><br><span>第一个半命题作文《我</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>了》较为开放,</span><span>要求补充完整题目后写一篇作文,</span><span>写一个自己在生活、学习中的故事,</span><span>本学期学习了不少通过语言、心理、动作、神态、环境等描写表达感受的方法,此命题的目的在于考察</span><span>学生是否能运用课文中学到的表达感受的方法,把自己的内心感受表达出来</span><span>。</span><br><br><span>选择第二道作文题《世界末日》的,</span><span>在看懂漫画内容的基础上,写出理解和感受,也可以借助漫画编写一个故事。题目自拟,但注意地上被丢弃的“科学”象征着迷信着的人们的愚昧,不能离开漫画主旨胡编乱造。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">一类:90分以上(27-30分):</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字迹工整、美观;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>写作文题目;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>语句通顺流畅优美,能用完整的句子表达出自己的意思,会引用学过的成语、谚语、俗语、名言等;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>内容具体,能紧紧围绕一个中心把意思表达清楚,能恰当地使用修饰性的词语;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>能根据自己表达的需要分段写作,层次分明;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>能正确使用常用的标点符号;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字数在</span><span>300</span><span>字以上。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">二类:80分以上(24-27分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字迹比较工整、美观;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>写作文题目;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>语句较通顺流畅,能用完整的句子表达出自己的意思,会引用学过的成语、谚语、俗语、名言等;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>内容较具体,能围绕一个中心把意思表达得较清楚,能使用修饰性的词语;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>能分段写作;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>能正确使用常用的标点符号;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字数在</span><span>250~300</span><span>字。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">三类:70分以上(21-24分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>书写不够认真;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>语句的完整性和通顺程度不够,句子干巴,表达不完整,有语病,错别字较多;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>内容比较简单,中心不明确,文章的意思表达不清楚;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>标点符号使用不当;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字数在</span><span>200~250</span><span>字。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">四类:60分以上(18-21分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>能围绕一个中心写,表达有一些毛病,但基本连贯。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">五类:60分以下(18分以下):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字迹潦草辨识困难;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>语句不通顺、不完整,病句多,错别字多;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>内容很简单,没有中心,记流水帐,重复罗嗦,或不知所云;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>标点符号错误明显;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>跑题;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.</span><span>字数在</span><span>200</span><span>字以下、只写一个作文题目,或者干脆空白。</span><br><br></div>