深圳市罗湖区2013年1月小学四年级语文上册期末考试试卷参考答案及评分建议

<div style="layout-grid:; "><div style="text-align: center;"><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#FF0000"><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">四年级语文期末考试参考答案及评分建议</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(2013.01)</span></font></div><strong><br></strong><br><div style="text-align: center;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: bold; "><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D">第一部分:基础知识积累与运用</font></span></div><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">一、词语知识检阅(共22分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.把下面破折号前面的句子抄写在田字格里,做到正确、工整、美观。(3分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>分值3分,分三等,要求格式正确,按要求书写,不写错字、别字,不漏字、减字。开头未空两格减0.5分,抄写了作者名字的减0.5分。</span><br><br><span>一等(3分):书写规范,整洁、美观,基本功好。</span><br><br><span>二等(2分):书写较规范,卷面整洁,基本功好。</span><br><br><span>三等(1分):书写不规范,卷面不整洁,基本功较差。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">看拼音,写词语。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(共6分&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">每个词1分;四字词的错一个字扣0.5分,直到扣完该词的1分为止</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>平衡&nbsp;&nbsp;凝视&nbsp;&nbsp;智慧&nbsp;&nbsp;融洽&nbsp;&nbsp;金碧辉煌&nbsp;&nbsp;神清气爽&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.上面六个词语中,用来形容建筑物的词语是</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">金碧辉煌</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">。(1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.请你按下列要求填空。(共5分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(以下仅供参考,运用其他的词语只要恰当就该给分)</span><br><br><span>(1)①&nbsp;杯弓蛇影&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;②&nbsp;虎头蛇尾</span><br><br><span>(2)滔滔不绝&nbsp;&nbsp;时间过得很快&nbsp;&nbsp;白驹过隙</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.按要求写句子。(共8分,每空2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①莫言发表感言。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>②深圳的秋天是一年中最美丽的季节。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>③中国属于世界,世界不属于中国。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(仿写恰当即可给分)</span><br><br><span>④感叹句:</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">钓鱼岛</span><span>自古以来就</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">是中国的</span><span>固有</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">领土</span><span>!&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">或</span><span>&nbsp;反问句:&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">钓鱼岛</span><span>自古以来</span><span>不</span><span>就</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">是中国的</span><span>固有</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">领土</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">吗?</span><span style=" font-style:italic; ">&nbsp;</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">二、语言精华搜索与创新(共22分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6.(共6分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(以下仅供参考,运用其他的内容只要恰当就该给分)</span><br><br><span>①</span><span>我读了</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">《最想做的事》《伊索寓言》</span><span>等书籍,其中,我最喜欢的人物是《</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">最想做的事》中的小男孩Booker</span><span>,让我明白了</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">不管我们做什么事情的时候都要有执着的精神</span><span>。</span><br><br><span>②我知道莫言是中国人第</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;一&nbsp;</span><span>个获得</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;诺贝尔文学&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>奖,我还知道他的几部作品,如《蛙》、《&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">红高粱</span><span>&nbsp;》。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7.请把下列诗句补充完整,然后在括号里写出与</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">诗有联系的地名</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;(共3分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>半帘花影月笼纱</span><br><br><span>四面荷花三面柳&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(山东济南大明湖铁公祠&nbsp;)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">8.把下列诗句补充完整。(共6分,每空1.5分。)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①只缘身在此山中</span><br><br><span>②柳暗花明又一村</span><br><br><span>③唯见长江天际流</span><br><br><span>④西出阳关无故人</span><br><br><span style=" letter-spacing:-; font-weight:bold; ">9.请将下列名言补充完整,</span><span style=" letter-spacing:-; font-weight:bold; ">然后为事例选择合适的名言填在横线上。</span><span style=" letter-spacing:-; font-weight:bold; ">(共5分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①一日难再晨&nbsp;&nbsp;岁月不待人</span><br><br><span>②荒于嬉&nbsp;毁于随&nbsp;</span><br><br><span><span>③</span></span><span>意思相对应的名言即可给分。</span><br><br><span>该题因题干不明确,影响学生审题,倘若学生答案因审题带来的错误,不扣分。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">10请用“地球、末日、太阳、人类”这4个词写一句话(至少选三个词语)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; background:; mso-shading:; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(2分,所写句子至少选三个词语且句意恰当即可得分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>例句:没有太阳,地球上的一切生物将停止生长,包括人类也将失去生命。</span><br><br><strong><br><div style="text-align: center;"><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D">第二部分:阅读理解与运用</font></div></strong><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">三、美文阅读理解。(11+&nbsp;14=25分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(一)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">颐和园(节选)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">11.(共3分,每空0.5分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>&nbsp;S&nbsp;&nbsp;shuang&nbsp;&nbsp;大&nbsp;&nbsp;8&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>①&nbsp;&nbsp;②</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">12.(3分,每空1.5分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;长&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;美</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">13.(3分,只要合理、恰当即可得分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>各位旅客,现在我们来到了长廊,它东起邀月门,西止石丈亭,全长728米,共273间。颐和园长廊是我国园林中最长的游廊,也有画廊之称。在廊中共有苏式彩绘1.4万多幅,而且很少重复。接下来,让我们一起去观赏一下这些美丽的图画吧!</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(仅作参考)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(二)妈妈回来了</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">14</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">.给下列词语找近义词.(2分,每空0.5分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;(以下仅供参考,运用其他的词语只要合理、恰当就可得分)</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>最终&nbsp;&nbsp;快乐&nbsp;&nbsp;温暖&nbsp;&nbsp;感受&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">15.(共3分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“妈妈终于从杭州回来了,我非常高兴!”小作者高兴是因为</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">妈妈的怀抱很暖和</span><span>,因为</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">妈妈回来了,爸爸的生日就能过得更好</span><span>,因为</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">妈妈在家里会给我读书</span><span>。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">16.(2分,每空1分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(以下</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">②答案仅供参考,</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">只要合理、恰当</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">即可得分</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;①&nbsp;我觉得修改的很好;</span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;②&nbsp;因为修改后的句子体现了爸爸因妈妈回来生日会过得更好,更能体现出妈妈对整个家庭的重要性。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">17.(2分)(以下答案仅供参考,只要合理、恰当即可得分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;每逢妈妈出差不在家的时候,我都很想念妈妈,能盼着妈妈早点回来。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">18.仿写(2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">(以下仅供参考,只要合理、恰当就可得分)</span><br><br><span>妈妈,每到了晚上,亮晶晶的星星们总是围着我团团转。</span><br><br><br><div style="text-align: center;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: bold; "><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#38761D">第三部分&nbsp;&nbsp;表达创作</font></span></div><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">四、生活能力展示。(5分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">19.请将成语还原。(2分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>①“痘”改为“斗”&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>②“衣”改为“依”</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">20.推荐对联。(3分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; font-emphasize:dot; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;好</span><span>(</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">&nbsp;</span><span style=" background:; mso-shading:; ">hǎo</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">&nbsp;</span><span>)读书</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;不好读书&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><br><br><span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=" text-decoration:underline ; ">&nbsp;好读书&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>不</span><span style=" font-emphasize:dot; ">好</span><span>(&nbsp;</span><span style=" background:; mso-shading:; ">hǎo&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span>)读书</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">五、习作水平比拼。(30分)</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>作文评价不要为难学生,作文最高可以打满分(30分);最低分只要是动笔,有一件具体的事或物体,建议不要低于15分,当然,考生一字未写就只能是0分。</span><br><br><span>小学四年级部分孩子在审题上存在一定问题,有的学生没有注意题目所提得要求。只要是学生能写清楚一件具体的事或物体,即便是想象作文,建议只是适当地扣审题失误分。.</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">一类:90分以上(27-30分):</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.</span><span>字迹工整、美观;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.</span><span>写作文题目;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.</span><span>语句通顺流畅优美,能用完整的句子表达出自己的意思,会引用学过的成语、谚语、俗语、名言等;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.</span><span>内容具体,能紧紧围绕一个中心把意思表达清楚,能恰当地使用修饰性的词语;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.</span><span>能根据自己表达的需要分段写作,层次分明;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6.</span><span>能正确使用常用的标点符号;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7.</span><span>字数在300字以上。</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">二类:80分以上(24-27分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.</span><span>字迹比较工整、美观;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.</span><span>写作文题目;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.</span><span>语句较通顺流畅,能用完整的句子表达出自己的意思,会引用学过的成语、谚语、俗语、名言等;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.</span><span>内容较具体,能围绕一个中心把意思表达得较清楚,能使用修饰性的词语;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.</span><span>能分段写作;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6.</span><span>能正确使用常用的标点符号;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">7.</span><span>字数在250~300字。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">三类:70分以上(21-24分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.</span><span>书写不够认真;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.</span><span>语句的完整性和通顺程度不够,句子干巴,表达不完整,有语病,错别字较多;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.</span><span>内容比较简单,中心不明确,文章的意思表达不清楚;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.</span><span>标点符号使用不当;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.</span><span>字数在200~250字。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">四类:60分以上(18-21分):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span>能围绕一个中心写,表达有一些毛病,但基本连贯。</span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">五类:60分以下(18分以下):</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; "></span><br><br><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">1.</span><span>字迹潦草辨识困难;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">2.</span><span>语句不通顺、不完整,病句多,错别字多;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">3.</span><span>内容很简单,没有中心,记流水帐,重复罗嗦,或不知所云;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">4.</span><span>标点符号错误明显;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">5.</span><span>跑题;</span><span style=" font-weight:bold; ">6.</span><span>字数在200字以下、只写一个作文题目,或者干脆空白。</span><br><br><br></div>